HERE IS AN EXAMPLE: BY Valeria Miquele 1st C 😱😱😱
The monster Jordi
It lurked in the shadows carefully hidden, silently watching and waiting to pounce. A creature so old and mystical that no human had ever set eyes on its terrifying features until now! Slowly, so slowly, it shifted its enormous bulk and began to move, metre by ponderous metre, towards the unsuspecting crowd.
The group of people felt observed and started to search for something weird, but they found nothing, so they kept going for their walk and then went home. The monster returned to his cave and had dinner. He ate some integral cookies because he was an ecologic monster that cultivated his own eggplants. Jordi went to sleep at 9:00PM.He dreamed that all wars on the earth stopped forever. He woke up at 7:00 AM because Jordi was a responsable monster. At 8:00AM he took his bike and went to town´s bakery and bought his special bread without carbohydrates, starch, cellulose, hermicullose, ligin and petanosams. He walked to his granny´s house and helped her to clean the house and to cook lentils without meat because he also was vegetarian. Then, Jordi cycled to the hospital as everyday he did to donate blood. When he arrived to his cave, he started to edit his yesterday´s video about good people that visit the forest because he was a blogger with a hundred million subscribers. In summary, he was the kindest monster I have ever seen. While Jordi was editing his video, he heard some strange sounds coming from the basement… He moved silently as he very well knew and went downstairs, down, down, down…
When Jordi finished the stairs, he found… A present from his granny!! He read the note: “to the greatest monster in the world. Love, granny”. He opened the present and he found a flower pot with an eggplant plant grounded. J
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